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She folds the white linen into a tidy square.
Her face is composed and deceptively serene,
the movements sure and economical
in their quietly practiced efficiency.

Such an old fashioned gesture of gallantry
offered thoughtlessly yet sincerely
at an inopportune parting of ways,
with not a backward glance from the giver.

She smoothes the worn edges lovingly
and places the handkerchief in the drawer,
nestled with her most intimate things
beneath a stack of modest lace-edged briefs.

There is the feel of ceremonial ritual,
a silent witchcraft performed countless times,
designed to secretly preserve and protect
the essence of what should have been.

But the familiar scent fades from the cloth,
and the comfort it affords in the dark journeys of night
clutched in her hand, pressed to her damp cheek,
becomes ever more elusive and fleeting.

Until one morning she cannot find this talisman
amongst the tossed and rumpled bed-sheets,
and searches frantically and breathlessly,
only abandoning the effort in order to dress for work.

It is then that she lifts the last pair of panties
from the bottom of her sacrosanct drawer,
and sees that she has not lost her memento after all,
but has instead been seduced by the sly sorcery of time.
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:iconvampireknightfan:
Beautiful Julie, simply beautiful

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:iconblueskye27:
What a sad poem. I can just see her sleeping with his handkerchief. It gives it an older feel (my great grandpa carried a handkerchief) yet feels fresh at the same time. Nice job.
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Thank you :hug:

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Hey --- that's MY box of crayons!!
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:iconvampireknightfan:
Your welcome.

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--When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car.

--If Barbie is so popular, why do you have to buy her friends?

Big Day Out 2010 is going to be fully awesome!!!!
:iconsiimba:
i like this, but I'm wondering why you used the word "economical" as an adjective? Perhaps you could use a different word to describe her movements?

Great piece all in all. :highfive:
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hmm..I used the word "economical" because I was trying to show how she has done this so many times. Like it's almost an automatic or routine act, no wasted effort or energy, even though the emotion behind it is great. Her movements contrast with her feelings.

I could try to think of another word though, if it seems to be too out of place or stops the flow of the piece.

Thanks for your comment!

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Such a sad but beautiful piece, dear.
xo

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Just kiss me once in the snow, I swear it never gets old.

I asked for an umbrella and you took away the rain.
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Thank you :hug:

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